Once this long valley hummed with sounds of trade
By horse and cart the farmers’ grain would come
To busy mills from which the flour was made
The tireless stream driving the wheels along
This valley road was thronged with horse and carts
It seemed like half the countryside was there
No room to move just endless stops and starts
While Jersey chatter filled the dusty air
The mills now gone the millers had their day
The stream still runs the reservoirs to fill
Now flour is made in quite a different way
But the whispers of the valley linger still
Few cars or carts are to be seen today
Walkers are at peace as they make their way
Nice. I really like this one, Roy. It does such a lovely job of conjuring up times gone by.
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Thanks Jane, one of my favourite running roads. The poem’s another shot at sonnet style though the rhythm’s not perfect here.
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Really effective. My favourite so far.
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Well done Roy, tackling the sonnet form successfully. Really like this one. 🙂
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Thanks ER, it’s certainly not easy achieving the rhythm, an example being the last line of this one. Perhaps I’ll tweak it a little.
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Very poignant description. Can picture it in my mind.
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Thank you Mithai, my favourite running road.
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