(Shakespeare would be impressed. Edit – no he wouldn’t, it’s not strict iambic pentameter. But let’s call it practice.)
I once loved you from afar
Your freshness like a dew-soaked rose
A silver cloud, a shining star
You passed me by with upturned nose
Then down the line you said good day
Your youthful dreams had not worked out
Your petals dropped and sad to say
My own life plans had come about
It was too late the chance had gone
I waited long but then I left
Your shimm’ring light would still have shone
Our lives entwined you not bereft
And now I see you’ve gone to seed
No more than a tangled weed
Fun sonnet.👍👍
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Though a bit harsh at the end I think 😕
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Yes, definitely a bit harsh at the end, but fun nonetheless.
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Thank you AM – fortunately I had no one in particular in mind writing this 🙂
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