All the afternoon she walked until her feet were sore. She found the South Bay and walked along the sand, even venturing to take off her shoes and refresh her aching feet at the water’s edge. She bought herself tea and a cake at one of the many cafes along the beach. She window-shopped but didn’t buy. As evening approached Rose, thoroughly lost but not caring a jot, got directions back to her guest house. She snoozed in the lounge for a while, then read a few pages of her book. Feeling peckish she slipped out for fish and chips from the establishment on the corner then, worn out, she slept like a queen without a care in the world.
In the morning she paid the lady £30 to stay another night.
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The Birmingham police scratched their heads. No one had seen Rose Hanley in three weeks. They had forced her door fearing the worst, but the house was empty. She had left no clues as to where she might have gone – no computer, documents, bank statements. There were no relatives enquiring after her – the Police had been alerted by a concerned neighbour. They reported the matter to the Missing Persons Bureau and put the file on the shelf.
Several months later the council boarded up the windows of 11 Knightly Road.
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Rose would meet Ronnie most days. They used to frequent the same cafe on South Bay, one that stayed open all year round. Presently they got to talking, then they started making arrangements to meet elsewhere. The cinema, the theatre, dinner even. He was a shy sort and seemed pleased that this Brummie woman was so friendly and agreeable. Vague though, no doubt about it. She either didn’t remember much or chose not to divulge anything about herself. Either way she seemed happy and content, drawing her pension from the bank every week and making it last. The landlady, pleased now with her permanent guest, had given her a preferential rate.
Eventually they were spending most of their time together. The following summer he started taking her to the cricket when Yorkshire happened to be playing at Scarborough. One day Warwickshire were the opposition and Rose was happy to go along and read a book while Ronnie enjoyed the match. Behind them a few visiting supporters watched the game jovially, getting louder as the afternoon wore on and the lagers kicked in. Rose became strangely unsettled by the loud, broad accents. These were voices that she knew from the past, long ago. But from where? Where was she from?
Rose. Rosemary for remembrance.
The uneasy feeling drifted away on the soft breeze. The cricketers packed up for the day. The loud visitors headed for the pub. Rose and Ronnie, his arm around her shoulder, walked slowly and contentedly back into town.
Aha, great ending – I’ve been waiting for this! Hadn’t envisaged this outcome at all – nice story, Roy 🙂
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Thanks Jenny – it worked, I think, in a quiet sort of way.
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Ah, I wasn’t sure where the story would go, but I wasn’t expecting that – good for Rose, I hope she’s found happiness even if she doesn’t quite remember where she came from.
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Thank you Andrea. Rose’s memory – and loss of it – combined to bring her contentment.
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Very nicely rounded off, Roy. More shorts please? 😉
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Thanks Dianne. I find short stories hard work really but I think this one worked quite well.
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What a great short story, Roy. I hope you continue sharing these with us. I love the line “She window-shopped but didn’t buy”. It’s a simple sentence but that was one of the major moments I could see her, understand her.
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Thank you Letizia, happy you liked this. That line was a bit of a steal from The Seekers’ ‘Georgy Girl’ which you’ll be too young to remember 🙂
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Ah! Will have to google that 🙂
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Nice job, Roy! A completely unexpected ending. I wonder, did you know it would end this way when you started the story?
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Thank you Jill! Good question and…no. I followed Rose onto the train and she told the story, not me. It could happen quite easily I think.
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Love this! Perhaps Rose had to forget her past to make room for love. I second the notion for more short stories. : )
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I like the way Rose’s long-term memory led her back to Scarborough and her short-term memory shut down so that she could enjoy her new life without worrying. And Rosemary for remembrance was apt. She told a nice little story, you’re right 🙂
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This was a nice ending. I wasn’t expecting Rose to stay, but that’s how life is sometimes, full of unexpected opportunities!
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Thank you Janna! I’m pleased Rose totally lost her memory in the end so she remained serene in her later days.
Do you know, I hardly thought of ‘soldier’ as slang, so familiar was it when I was young.
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Yay! A little fiction. I like a good short story and certainly enjoyed this.
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Good, thank you Julie. Us writers are pathetically grateful when people like stuff 🙂
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Ah yes! Love it Roy and I’m glad I set it aside for a quiet moment.
Have to say, I feel that there are times in real life when a little memory loss can have positive outcomes.
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Thanks Jean. Yes I’ve read that, although distressing for others a loss of memory isn’t always totally negative.
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I’ve experienced it with a few loved ones and I think it can be quite positive for all parties when numbing harsh realities.
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Reblogged this on Back On The Rock.
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Happy ending for Rose. Bit spooky too.
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Yes – maybe more a case of kindly dementia allowing Rose to enjoy her later years.
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Hadn’t thought of that. Good point.🤔😏
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What a joyful ending for dear Rose. I loved this so much.
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Ah thanks Bridgette, it could have ended badly I think but she involuntarily forgot her old troubles to enjoy her new life.
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I am so glad it was a happy ending. You are very good at building the suspense in a story.
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Ah thanks Kerry, I’m still rather fond of this little story I wrote some years back.
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