Hurrah! I’ve just finished the first, handwritten, draft of my ‘Irish Novel’.
In the spirit of NaNoWriMo I decided to prioritise my writing during the month of November. In doing so I wrote maybe 32,000 words which brought home to me what an achievement 50,000 words is. Yet people manage it no problem, even those with full-time jobs. For example Jae at Lit and Scribbles is submitting 80,000 words. Michelle at 12 Novels fell a bit behind and had to write 17,903 on THE LAST DAY 😮 Huh?
That would have been it, more or less, in my early writing days. Tidy it up a bit, print and self-publish, no bother. I know a bit better now, though I still often wonder if some authors agonise overmuch about following all the advice available out there from very clued-up people. The trick, I suppose, is to take on the best of the advice available without losing the flow of the story, and one’s own voice, in the process.
So, a second draft. Even if I’d written the thing in a logical order I know that much now. As it is there are sections all over the place. For example, the scene I intend to be the opening one only came to me at the halfway stage.
It’s too short at approx. 62,000 words. I have endless material but it needs to be knitted in properly without it feeling like a patchwork quilt.
I’ve been less careful with pen and ink, knowing it’s only a rough draft. It’s going to be a total re-write with what I’ve written just a guide at best.
For this project I’ve invested in Scrivener. It will take some getting used to but I need something to create order out of chaos. Lots of writers swear by it.
And a title? Again, with my first three books, I had the title fixed virtually from the start. There’s plenty of time yet though and I might throw it out to bloggers for ideas in due course.
Finally for this post a shout out for a new website dedicated to Channel Island fiction. There’s poetry and short stories together with links to published books. Have a look.
I’m so impressed that you stuck at it and wrote that much, Roy. It’s a really good self imposed discipline and at the end of the day (or should that be month!), you’ve got a good wodge of text that you can play around with. I must really try to follow your example next year – clearly having a part time job is no excuse 🙂
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Thanks Jenny. It’s been fun so far, loving the storyline. And I’m equally looking forward to the revisions to come. Yes, looking forward to reading some extended writing of yours.
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Congrats, Roy! It must be a joy-and a relief- to get all that done. Having read both Tess of Portelet Manor and Barry, I`m guessing you`ve a winner on your hands there.
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Thank you RH. I should be improving in theory so we’ll see. Thanks for your support.
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Congrats Roy on your accomplishment. Good luck in the editing process. ~Gail
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Thank you Gail, though my only accomplishment to date is getting to base camp. Hopefully with the Christmas hols coming up, and no family commitments, I’ll be able to crack on and get something readable out for a beta read and critique.
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Nice job, Roy, and handwritten…my favorite way to write. I can’t wait to read your opinion on Scrivener. I’ve heard good things and bad things about the program, but certainly more good. My problem… normally I don’t have the patience. Again, congratulations on a job well done!
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Thanks Jill, though it’s only a first step. A new approach for me which will hopefully pay off. I’ve popped the first chapter onto Scrivener already. I’m not sure I quite ‘get it’ yet but, even if I use few of the features, it will allow me to review the story in bite-sized chunks without having to continually scroll a full document. And I can interchange many of the scenes/sections without fear of screwing up the whole thing. Thanks for your support!
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Perhaps you can host a tutorial in the future. 🙂
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I am amazed that you can write that much by hand. Will you edit as you type it in or type it in first? I hope you blog about that experience sometime. I have to find the time this week to blog about my NaNo experience. Validated 50086 on Nov 26, with tonnes of work left if I decide to pursue it.
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Hello Jane,
Hey, great stuff on the NaNo! I hope you’re working towards publication one day.
I’m sure handwriting is faster than my one finger typing Jane! Time will tell if it’s affected the quality for the better. My guess is no, but it’s given me a certain freedom knowi9ng that I’m going to revisit it all from scratch anyway. No, I’ll edit/rewrite as I go then get someone to have a look at it for me.
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Congratulations, Roy. I’m looking forward to hearing about how you go about the publishing process for this new work. Keep us posted – haha.
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Thank you Francis. I’ll see what I’ve got in due course and, if I like it enough, I might query a few Irish agents who might think there’s a market for it. We’ll see.
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Congrats, Roy! Handwritten?? That’s even more impressive; I haven’t written a story that was since the early 2000s, and never a novel that way at all. My poor, underdeveloped hand muscles would never last!
I’ll be interested to hear your later thoughts on Scrivener. I’ve never tried it myself – I’m happy with the bland, non-specificity of Word – but it’s true that lots of writers swear by Scrivener.
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Hi Janna, I’ve enjoyed the process really, seeing a hardback notebook fill up and starting a new one. Scrivener will be interesting!
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Well done, Roy! Hope you have a good run at the next draft. Seems like you’re fit as a fiddle! Oh and thanks for the link to Channel Island Fiction.
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Thanks Jean, looking forward to what will be some pretty major revision though I’m pleased with the story thus far.
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Good for you, Roy! I’m so impressed that you were able to write so much and that you wrote every day; that takes a lot of discipline. All the best with the revisions 🙂
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Thanks Letizia but compared with others who storm through projects I’m a real sluggard. It’s nice to have the basis of a good story to work with now though.
(I understand you’re writing for Britt’s blog shortly – I shall look forward to reading that 🙂 )
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Yes, will be making my ‘debut’ on Britt’s blog! It was my first time writing with a prompt. So exciting 🙂
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Congrats Roy I look forward to reading it. Hand written! Wow I am impressed. I use to love hand writing but the corporate world stole that from me years ago (I use them for all my excuses 🙂 and hard to get back.
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Thanks Lisa – I don’t think it’s that unusual though. I was inspired to give it a try by more than one writer. Nice doing a first edit directly from a lot of scribble though – plenty of scope for rewriting and amendment.
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Congratulations all the same! 32,000 words is a great accomplishment.
As for the first scene – for one of my manuscripts, I went through about 5 openings before coming with the one that set the right tone and gripped the reader. I often think the opening that stands with the finished novel can’t be written until a whole draft is completed.
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Thank you! Yes, funny how the perfect opening suddenly came to me way into the story. I was happy to pop it in almost unchanged at the start of my first revision. Thanks again, and I’ll shortly be popping across to your blog 🙂
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Woot, woot! Awesome job, Roy! Can’t wait to read it.
And, I think I said it before but I love that you wrote your first draft by hand. I’ve been craving silly things like a typewriter just so I can have the speed without looking at a screen. Do enough of that throughout the day. I wrote most of Beneath the Satin Gloves by hand, since that was the way I had always written creatively before. Maybe I’ll go back to that again.
I’ve got three bloody pages left on this second draft to finish after work and teaching tonight. Then it’s “Hurrah!” for Britt, too. : )
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Thanks Britt. I’ll certainly consider doing the same again as, apart from anything else, it’s easier to rewrite as you type the handwritten sections, rather than just tinker around the edges.
Have you got a timetable for publication?
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Not sure yet. Calling it Spring for now, probably toward the end. We’ll see how sprightly my in-law editors are feeling when the time comes. : )
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Congratulations, Roy! That is a huge accomplishment!
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Not really, but appreciate your support Naomi!
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Oh my gosh, Roy! You’ve finished your first draft! Everything else is cake! It’s so much easier, at least for me, to edit than to generate new material. It will be an age before I finish the first draft of the manuscript I am working on. Please enjoy your accomplishment, and all of us who have such a long way to go will enjoy it vicariously through you, and know that It. Can. Be Done.
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🙂 Of course I’m pleased Naomi and thank you for your encouragement.
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Congratulations! I am so envious. I wish I’d participated. Reading about your process and others makes me so…envious. Just like I said. Next year for sure.
Let us know how Scrivener goes. I’m curious.
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Thanks Julie. I’m drawing a deep breath right preparing to dive into revision #1 using Scrivener.
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Congratulations! That’s quite an achievement. There’s no way I could write so many words in a single month (not even 32,000).
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Thanks AMB, though it pales alongside others. Maybe if someone would do my job for me I’d get on faster.
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